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Title: Teacher's Pet
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Dom/Ian
Summary: There's a lesson to learn...
Disclaimer: I'm lying through my teeth, here, don't believe a word. It's called ficition. Or sick fantasies, depending on who's calling it.
Author's note: blaming this one on [livejournal.com profile] not_yet_tamed and [livejournal.com profile] sparktastic, because these two are a very very bad influence. Thank you [livejournal.com profile] rynalwyn for the quick beta.


Young teacher the subject
Of schoolgirl fantasy
She wants him so badly
Knows what she wants to be
Inside her there's longing
This girl's an open page
Book marking - she's so close now
This girl is half his age


Dom remembers what it was like to be in school, how much fun it was to sit and daydream, to be the class clown and never listen to the teacher closely. Dom wasn't what you would have called a model student.

Now, he sits with his back straight, posture as perfect as he can hold it, chin lowered and eyes fixed onto his trembling hands. The lesson is worth his attention, patience something that doesn't come naturally to him but something he's more than eager to learn. He tries not to move, tries to hold in his breath and be as silent as he possibly can, hands in tight fists, resting tensely on his thighs. He's concentrating hard, concentrating on not moving, on not disturbing the lesson that is taking place, hoping that if he sits still and waits, pays attention, then it'll be worth it in a way it never seemed to be during his teenage years.

He reaches in, thinks hard and tries to conjure up memories from science lessons, theories learned and demonstrated endlessly. Names are popping up, Pythagoras and other dead Greek guys, but try as he may, he can't find it in him to not mess up. He blows a frustrated sigh and shifts in his seat, squirms, unable to hold himself still a moment longer.

There's the wet pop of a sound, Ian's red red lips smacking together as they release Dom's penis. Dom swears under his breath, frustration running deep through his veins as he looks at Ian's disapproving frown just beyond the tip of his painfully hard cock. Ian shakes his head and looks sternly at Dom, his eyes twinkling and belying the reprimanding tone of his voice.

"Now. I told you to sit still, Dominic. I said that I would teach you patience and I'm sorry to say that you have failed again. You are a most difficult student, you know that?"

Dom breathes slowly, in and out, calming breaths. His hands are still fisted, he is still trembling all over and trying to control himself, trying not to give into the urge to lean forward and claim Ian's mouth. His cock twitches as the soft breath of Ian's tsk tsk washes over the tip but he doesn't move, just tenses in place and keeps his voice at a low murmur.

"I'm sorry, sir. I have been a bad boy."

Ian smiles and nods, his hand coming up and the tips of his fingers barely grazing the inside of Dom's thigh, the touch excruciatingly close and yet denied.

"You have been a bad boy indeed. I think I will have to punish you for this, Dominic. If you can't do as I say now, then it is my duty to make sure you will in the future. There must be a way to teach you some discipline."

Dom shivers at the word discipline, remembering endless hours spent in detention. His breath shudders to the rhythm of Ian's fingers now wrapped loosely at the base of his cock, almost but not quite touching his balls. Ian isn't moving, just looking at him expectantly, as if waiting for a sign, for Dom's agreement to being punished.

"Detention?" Dom whispers incredulously. Ian smiles wider, licking his lips and leaning imperceptibly forward, mouth drawing even closer to Dom's penis. His words wrap around it, hot and constricting, as efficient as Ian's hand now moving faster.

"Oh, I'm a little partial to more old fashioned ways myself. A good spanking always drives the lesson home."

Dom comes.


Date: 2004-08-09 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] not-yet-tamed.livejournal.com


Nnnngh! How did you know that I have a sekrit teacher!kink omg?
I think my icon is close to comming and so am I
*hearts you so much*

Re: <333

Date: 2004-08-09 12:23 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
:-D Yay! So glad you like it. I don't know why, but I suddenly had to write this last night. Wasn't even doing anything in particular, wasn't reading anything, looking at any pics... it just popped up and I had to write it down. *shakes head* I think you've corrupted me.

And I didn't know you had that kink, but dude, that's one of my biggest kinks, so... hehehe...

Date: 2004-08-09 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophrosyne31.livejournal.com
that last line. i think you just perfected the understated but absolutely efficient and erotic last line.

and yes, i love seeing dom trying to be good. :D

Date: 2004-08-09 12:25 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
*blushes* Eeee! Thank you. And that last line... well, I thought it was bit abrupt, but the more I thought about it, the more I realized that I couldn't say the same thing any other way. You know? Cuz he comes, and that's pretty much it. Takes him by surprise, should take the reader a bit by surprise, too, and anyway, there's only so many ways to say something like this, lol. I thought I'd go for the most efficient one, lol. So glad you like it, though. Thank you! <333

Date: 2004-08-09 04:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wordsandkay.livejournal.com

Oh my GOD. YES. This was delicious.

Date: 2004-08-09 12:26 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Heeeee! Yay! Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. :-)

Date: 2004-08-09 11:16 am (UTC)
ext_16562: <lj user="black_balloonxx"> (Default)
From: [identity profile] kashmir1.livejournal.com

*is incoherent*

Date: 2004-08-09 12:27 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Hehehehe, incoherent is good, I like incoherent. ;-) Thanks for reading!

Date: 2004-08-09 12:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apple-scruffer.livejournal.com
oh my god.

*fans self*

I might be a slight Ian/Dom shipper now...

*turns into melted puddle of goo at base of chair*

Date: 2004-08-09 05:59 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Ooooooo, I love turning people into puddles of goo! *bounces* ;-) Thank you for reading and enjoying, dear. :-)

Date: 2004-08-09 01:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] desire-billy.livejournal.com
Oh hell yes! This is such a hot pairing! Very sexy!! Mmmmm, Dom IS a bad bad boy isn't he? Excellent fic!

Date: 2004-08-09 06:00 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Heeeee! Dom certainly IS a very very bad boy. But that's ok because Ian is obviously really intent on teaching him a few lessons. *giggles* Thanks for reading and so happy you enjoyed!

Date: 2004-08-09 01:23 pm (UTC)
lannamichaels: Astronaut Dale Gardner holds up For Sale sign after EVA. (Default)
From: [personal profile] lannamichaels

Date: 2004-08-09 06:01 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
GUH is good, I like GUH. ;-) Thank you for GUHing, dear. *beams*

Date: 2004-08-09 01:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whitewizzy.livejournal.com
Oh God!

Date: 2004-08-09 06:02 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
*fans you with Ian's hat* You're ok, there? ;-) Thank you for stopping by! :-)

Date: 2004-08-10 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] whitewizzy.livejournal.com
Trust me, I'll always be wanting to stop by for that sort of thing :D

Date: 2004-08-09 02:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] willowwing.livejournal.com
Dom comes. - Best possible last line. I had a creative writing teacher who told me that the better a writer got the fewer words they used. You must be approaching perfect.

Date: 2004-08-09 06:03 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
*blushes a really really dark red* Best compliment ever, thank you. I actually had some hesitations about that last line, but as I thought about it, I realized there was no other way to say it. Because, you know. Dom comes. :-) I'm glad you think it was a good idea to go with this. Thank you so much for reading and replying.

Date: 2004-08-09 04:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] poopiesquish.livejournal.com

You just fed my fetish. *Licks the Dom/Ian sex*

Date: 2004-08-09 06:04 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Heeeeeeeeeeee! Your icon never fails to make me smile really big. I just love it, lol. Thank you dear, am really glad you liked it! :-)

Date: 2004-08-09 05:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jedusor.livejournal.com

Yeah, I think... you know... it was... NNGH.

Date: 2004-08-09 06:05 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
NNGH? Well, I think I like that. ;-) Thank you, darling. *smooch* And did I mention I love your brother's name? :-)

Date: 2004-08-09 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jedusor.livejournal.com
We realized after the name was chosen that "Lincoln" is the name of a They Might Be Giants album, and TMBG is one of the few musical groups liked by everyone in our household.

BTW, this might sound a bit odd, but how is my username pronounced? *blush* I honestly have no clue. The reason I picked it is the French translation in the Harry Potter books of Tom Riddle's name (Riddle is my favorite HP character). I don't know anyone else who speaks French, at least not to my knowledge...

Date: 2004-08-10 04:42 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (Default)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Oh, dude, I don't know how to tell you how your username is being pronounced. The three syllables have such distinct sounds that can't be found in the Englsih language... and I have no clue how to write them in phonetics either. :-( Sorry! And what do you mean about it being some kind of translation? I have no clue about the French Harry Potter books, darling, I've never even opened them. I've only ever read the English ones, only ever seen the movie in English... am clueless. I'll look into recording your username somehow, if you want. So you can hear it, lol.

Date: 2004-08-11 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] philomel.livejournal.com
GAH. *incoherent*

*offers you a nice, shiny apple*

Date: 2004-08-11 12:48 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (pet otp!! omg!)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Oooooo... *takes apple and bites it* Mmmmmm... And considering how absolutely wonderful I found your latest Dom/Ian, I have to say that I am most honored that you stopped by and read this one. Thank you so much.

Date: 2004-08-11 10:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] philomel.livejournal.com
Bah. I cannot resist the power of the Dom/Ian. And you write so wonderfully, I don't have to resist.

Eek! *licks your icon, repeatedly*

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