*blushes* Eeee! Thank you. And that last line... well, I thought it was bit abrupt, but the more I thought about it, the more I realized that I couldn't say the same thing any other way. You know? Cuz he comes, and that's pretty much it. Takes him by surprise, should take the reader a bit by surprise, too, and anyway, there's only so many ways to say something like this, lol. I thought I'd go for the most efficient one, lol. So glad you like it, though. Thank you! <333
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Date: 2004-08-09 12:25 pm (UTC)