Date: 2005-06-09 12:41 pm (UTC)
I don't know if I can give any constructive criticism, cos I'm reduced to tears here!

All I can say is it's lovely; sad and beautiful.

It was like a phone-call to someone whose lines were blocked: she had a life on hold and she was waiting for it to be put through.

That line hit me right in the face.


Did I ever show you my attempt at original fic? I wrote it last summer. I'll link you if you're interested.
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