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In answer to that writing meme, lotrips shorts.

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When cloudy was the weather. NC-17, Dom/Ian McKellen for [livejournal.com profile] seraphinhunter. (396 words) This one is also dedicated to [livejournal.com profile] sparktastic because she asked (and she squirmed!), and because she gave me the title for it.

The song of the rain against the roof of the car is relentless and lulling, almost like a lullaby. Ian is lounging back against the rough fabric of the backseat, waiting for the fog to lift and the weather to be less gloomy and more appropriate for filming. There are no trailers, here, nothing much except a bunch of cars and trucks, and if it was hard enough to find somewhere to hide away from the storm, it was even harder to get some privacy.

He opens his eyes and stretches his fingers against the window, tracing wet trails through the condensation. It's getting dark, darker, clouds heavier and stormier and something tells him there won't be anything else done today. Any minute now, someone will come up to the car and break through his warm cocoon. He smiles lazily then pushes his hips down and closer to the edge of the seat.

There's a muffled moan, a surprised little whimper that shoots another pleasurable thrill up Ian's spine. He reaches down, pushes his hand against Dominic's face. His fingers graze Dominic's lips and push in, right at the corner of Dominic's stretched mouth, reaching inside delicately to touch Dominic's tongue wrapped around his cock. Warmth, tight and slick and delightful. Ian pushes a bit more, wraps two fingers around his own dick, pushes it harder into Dominic's mouth and shudders when Dominic whimpers again. He sighs and comes with a low moan, fingers and cock still buried inside Dominic's mouth as he swallows.

He lets himself float down from the pleasurable high—taking a moment to catch his breath—and opens his eyes , listening to the sound of his blood rushing in his ears and trying to pick out the sound of the rain again. Dominic is still kneeling between his legs, cramped uncomfortably in the small space between the front and back seats. He's looking up at Ian, defiant and dishevelled, his mouth obscenely red and swollen, still wet with spit and come. His voice rings petulantly through the car as he finally speaks.

"I asked for shelter."

Ian smiles, then, amused and relaxed. "Indeed, you did. But you could have just as well gone with your hobbit friends. You didn't, and you and I both knew what that meant."

Dominic's scowl eases and smoothes over with his usual smirk. "That you'll reciprocate?"

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Le Téléphone Pleure. G, Dom/Viggo for [livejournal.com profile] silme711. (264 words)

Dom calls Viggo because it’s been months, maybe even years, and with everything that didn’t happen between them, he feels bad for letting things go. Viggo picks up on the ninth ring, just as Dom is getting ready to hang up.

“Viggo? Hi, it’s Dom.”

There’s a pause after that, silence stretching uncomfortably between old friends who haven’t spoken in too long, and don’t quite know what to say to break the awkwardness that’s settled. Dom hears the static on the line, distance breathing through the phone like a reminder of things past and lost. Viggo speaks first, voice soft and heavy with things unsaid.

“Dom. Where do you live, now?”

Dom hesitates briefly, thinks about the small flat in London, thinks about going home and meeting Viggo there, and thinks about rattling off the address like he would to any close friend.

“Oh, you know, here and there.”

They talk a bit longer after that, trading platitudes and stale news. Viggo tells Dom about moving in three days, about selling the ranch and going to Europe for a while. “Maybe I could call you” he says, tone hopeful, and Dom says “yes, you could, you should,” and there’s something there, a note of eagerness; a promise, even, maybe…

When Dom hangs up, it’s with a heart full of hope. He goes through the motions of filming, of packing and going home with a constant thrill at the thought of the future, and it’s not before he’s on a plane three weeks later that he remembers.

He never even gave Viggo his phone number.

Date: 2004-07-24 03:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jillybinks.livejournal.com
Ohhhhh, this is lovely and so nicely hot!! I love how you think that Ian in alone in the car until, wow, he really isn't.

Fabulous!!!

Date: 2004-07-24 03:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unautremonde.livejournal.com
Heeeee! Thank you! I wanted something both slow and lazy like a rainy day, and yet still as sensal as possible. :-) Glad you liked it. :-)

Date: 2004-07-24 03:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seraphinhunter.livejournal.com
asljöfdkdfasjklödsfajköldjöklfsadfksljaösfjkaldfsj!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes OMG! It's so HOT AND GUH! Dom sucking Ian off while Ian has his fingers in Dom's mouth.

<333333333333333333333333333333333333
and it somehow amuses me how you used my sentence :D

Date: 2004-07-24 03:33 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
:-D Am so glad you like it, darling. It was fun to write. Actually, it was fun to think about as this was going around and around in my head all day until I came home and wrote it down. I was in town, walking around, and I had all these images of Dom sucking Ian off in my head. Mmmmmm... I think I should than you for this one. ;-)

And yeah, your sentence wasn't exactly easy to use, couldn't think of anything at first... lol.

Date: 2004-07-24 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] philomel.livejournal.com
Fucking gah!

This is the pairing that I really should not adore, but absolutely do.

Mmmmmmph, lovely. :)

Date: 2004-07-25 02:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] philomel.livejournal.com
*grin* I've been sitting here wondering if I could lean in and bite Dom's perfect shoulder in your icon.

Oh, and this was made by [livejournal.com profile] raynemaiden. *pets the Ian*

Date: 2004-07-25 03:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seraphinhunter.livejournal.com
:D ours icons should date each other, don't you think so?

and i just stalked your lj a litte bit and read your dom/siri fic, thus i am friending you, because i always thought i'd be the only one writing het!dom.
<3

Date: 2004-07-25 05:00 am (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Hey! My icon is going to be jealous! *gives you both death glares* ;-)

Date: 2004-07-25 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] philomel.livejournal.com
*bites your icon!Dom's shoulder for good measure*

[/spamming your post]

Date: 2004-07-25 02:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] philomel.livejournal.com
ours icons should date each other, don't you think so?

*nods* Or get right down to making sweet, sweet May-December love.

Groovy! Friending you back. :) I adore your Dom/Hannah, by the way. I need to poke around and read more of your fics.

Date: 2004-07-25 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unautremonde.livejournal.com
Heeee, thank you! I don't know that I could do more with this pairing than a silly PWP, though. I wish I could because I certainly enjoy reading it when it's done right. :-) At any rate, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

Date: 2004-07-24 11:37 pm (UTC)
ext_230: a tiny green frog on a very red leaf (smutitty-smut-smut)
From: [identity profile] anatsuno.livejournal.com
guh! very good, oh yeah.

Date: 2004-07-25 05:01 am (UTC)
crazybutsound: (lotr billy pale ringwraiths)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
*beams* Thank you. :-)

And hahahahaha! Your icon!

Date: 2004-07-25 12:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] poopiesquish.livejournal.com
I FUCKING LOVE IT!!

I am like the biggest Ian/Dom shipper on the planet, you have no idea! You made my night!

Date: 2004-07-25 05:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unautremonde.livejournal.com
*blushes* Thank you, I'm so glad I could make someone this happy with it. I admit the idea of Dom and Ian together is a lovely one, mmmm... Thank you reading!

Date: 2004-07-25 02:44 am (UTC)
ext_36767: (Default)
From: [identity profile] buckle-berry.livejournal.com
Lord. That was lovely. Seems to me you can pair Dom with anyone and it works, but these two really work together somehow. And hot too. Yes.

Date: 2004-07-25 05:04 am (UTC)
crazybutsound: (lost dom eyelash)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Thank you. :-) And I totally agree with you that you could pair Dom with anyone and it would work. *nods* Though I'm probably biased, lol.

Date: 2004-07-25 07:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophrosyne31.livejournal.com
very lovely, very subtle, very atmospheric and vivid. i could see the haze of rain and ian's eyes darkening to grey.

and, yes, fingers and mouth, yes yes yes.

really elegant and sexy. mmmmm.

Date: 2004-07-25 05:24 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (*lick* = dom shoulder)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
*blushes* Thank you. Atmospheric was what I was aiming for, really. I wanted some lazy rainy day feeling, in which the sex wouldn't be all about hard and now and orgasm like it usually is in PWPs. Not to mention that I don't usually do PWPs, lol. Or very rarely anyway. :-) I'm really honored that you liked it, thank you so much for reading! :-)

Date: 2004-07-26 06:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophrosyne31.livejournal.com
i love this line: He's looking up at Ian, defiant and dishevelled, his mouth obscenely red and swollen, still wet with spit and come..

because i, oh absolutely, god save me, can see this.

you should (not-)do more PWPs, darling. because you (don't-)do them so well. *g*

Date: 2004-07-26 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sophrosyne31.livejournal.com
oh god i hope that made sense.

Date: 2004-07-25 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beizy.livejournal.com
His fingers graze Dominic's lips and push in, right at the corner of Dominic's stretched mouth, reaching inside delicately to touch Dominic's tongue wrapped around his cock.

That line is bloody gorgeous.

Date: 2004-07-25 07:51 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (lost dom eyelash)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
*blushes prettily* Heeee! Nobody's ever told me my porny lines were gorgeous before! *hugs you enthusiastically* Thank you! :-)

Date: 2004-07-25 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beizy.livejournal.com
Oh, and, er, since I'm saying this in my journal as I rec... I love the transition between image 1 (Ian) and image 2 (sex). That shift is so easily bungled. x_x But it's perfect here!

Date: 2004-07-26 05:34 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (lost dom eyelash)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
*blushes some more* Oooo, thank you. That was indeed the part that had me worried as I could not imagine this Ian/Dom rushed or wild or any other thing I've seen in many PWPs (not that it doesn't work, but that wasn't what I had in mind for the two of them). I wanted slow lazy rainy atmosphere, and I'm so happy you think the transition works. :-) Thank you so much for the rec, too! *feels all special*

Date: 2004-07-25 09:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] overloved.livejournal.com
He's looking up at Ian, defiant and dishevelled, his mouth obscenely red and swollen, still wet with spit and come.

Woah. That line made my stomach drop. Fan-fucking-tastic.

Date: 2004-07-26 05:35 pm (UTC)
crazybutsound: (lost dom eyelash)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Oooo, it did? *claps excitedly* You have made my day! Thank you so much for that amazing compliment. :-) I am delighted to know you enjoyed it. Thank you thank you thank you!

Date: 2004-08-02 10:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silme711.livejournal.com
*cries*. omg teh angst! I love it and the title! I wish I'd know this song ;)

Dom hears the static on the line, distance breathing through the phone like a reminder of things past and lost. So beautifully sad.

And it's not bad, *shakes head*. I really like it and my sentence shouted ANGST, ..so thank you SO much!

Date: 2004-08-03 06:57 am (UTC)
crazybutsound: (Default)
From: [personal profile] crazybutsound
Hehehe, it's a very very silly song, but I'm sure you could find it... it's "Le Téléphone Pleure" by Claude François. :-)

And yay! I'm so glad you like it, darling! I tried not to write angst, but somehow, it's the only way I can imagine these two together... dunno why. I wrote this on the beach, too. ;-) So it's not like I was in a bad or sad mood, lol. But anyway, am so happy you like it. :-) Thank you! *smooch*

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